03-16-2014, 08:29 PM
"short" "sweet" and wheres the "Point"?
Very mildly descriptive, but i enjoyed its overall, punctuating firmness, from start to finish, quick. Just lacks a certain level of pertinent description, in which required for "Conclusive ending". maybe focus on a "point" of plot" and "Meaningful ending", maybe a by using a more descriptive by using a word with attributes related to dichotomy. More meaningful in short verse.
Very mildly descriptive, but i enjoyed its overall, punctuating firmness, from start to finish, quick. Just lacks a certain level of pertinent description, in which required for "Conclusive ending". maybe focus on a "point" of plot" and "Meaningful ending", maybe a by using a more descriptive by using a word with attributes related to dichotomy. More meaningful in short verse.