03-16-2014, 02:47 AM
Thank you John
The title is an instruction to spring to start, I suppose I could have added 'forth' or 'out of your buds' but went for the Hymns Ancient and Modern approach.
Frost's house is white, and on that morning, it was very foggy, the sun shone through a slash in the fog, illuminating the windows brilliant yellow - thus it looked like a daisy - and the yellowness of the suns rays connected back the to crack in the fog - not unlike the light in an old cinema. Barwaken is a word I made up, bar - without, and waken - to awaken - put then together, unawakened sky.
The Queen, refers to the Celtic river goddess for who the valley is named - depending on which source you believe. And no the night is the night, and being in a valley, when the sun heats the rain sodden hills the fog rises to fill the bowl.
I am not sure where else I could put it - clean answers only.
Thanks for the feedback.
The title is an instruction to spring to start, I suppose I could have added 'forth' or 'out of your buds' but went for the Hymns Ancient and Modern approach.
Frost's house is white, and on that morning, it was very foggy, the sun shone through a slash in the fog, illuminating the windows brilliant yellow - thus it looked like a daisy - and the yellowness of the suns rays connected back the to crack in the fog - not unlike the light in an old cinema. Barwaken is a word I made up, bar - without, and waken - to awaken - put then together, unawakened sky.
The Queen, refers to the Celtic river goddess for who the valley is named - depending on which source you believe. And no the night is the night, and being in a valley, when the sun heats the rain sodden hills the fog rises to fill the bowl.
I am not sure where else I could put it - clean answers only.
Thanks for the feedback.