Damaged.

Damaged.

DobbysSockk
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03-15-2014, 07:42 PM

It's great! I love everything about it!, I would only say what everyone else has, it needs to be written in stanzas. Break it up and you can stress certain parts more with the break in the text and the pause as someone reads it.

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Damaged. - by TheNotoriousLmc - 07-16-2013, 12:10 PM

RE: Damaged. - by PAX - 02-09-2014, 10:37 AM

RE: Damaged. - by Lock Key - 02-09-2014, 12:21 PM

RE: Damaged. - by Sheep - 02-11-2014, 06:59 PM

RE: Damaged. - by ChristopherSea - 02-11-2014, 08:50 PM

RE: Damaged. - by 5th Flow Boy - 02-17-2014, 02:19 PM

RE: Damaged. - by kindofahippy - 02-18-2014, 02:07 AM

RE: Damaged. - by DobbysSockk - 03-15-2014, 07:42 PM

RE: Damaged. - by MadisonDiem - 03-16-2014, 08:49 AM

RE: Damaged. - by Hermit - 03-16-2014, 01:10 PM

RE: Damaged. - by WordJunky - 03-16-2014, 08:16 PM

RE: Damaged. - by denniswilson - 04-07-2014, 05:34 AM

RE: Damaged. - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 02:28 PM

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