03-15-2014, 02:22 PM
I'm a little Friday night tired and buzzed, but I wanted to say that I read this one 5-6 times, and enjoyed. I love poems that...what?...do the darkly ominous and foreboding in somewhat "normal" settings. I'm probably off, but that was what I was attracted to in your poem, and certain ways you rendered it.
Anyway...thank you for the read.
God bless.
Anyway...thank you for the read.
God bless.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."