Relic
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(03-15-2014, 05:53 AM)trueenigma Wrote:  
(03-15-2014, 01:41 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  (jeremy/geoff/trueE edit 2) is posted. As always, I appreciate the help.
My bad,
For some reason I kept reading sit as transitive: entombed in amber, I sit her on the shelf.

I suppose it is because I am always expecting something to happen.
Yes, those fossils don't do very much. Do those two lines read any better edited (i.e., who is in amber in the one line and less legalese in the other)? You know that I always leap into action upon your advice.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Messages In This Thread
Relic - by ChristopherSea - 03-12-2014, 07:13 PM
RE: Relic - by jeremyyoung - 03-13-2014, 02:22 AM
RE: Relic - by ChristopherSea - 03-13-2014, 03:13 AM
RE: Relic (edit 1) - by ChristopherSea - 03-13-2014, 05:50 AM
RE: Relic (edit 1) - by geoff - 03-14-2014, 10:28 AM
RE: Relic (edit 1) - by trueenigma - 03-14-2014, 12:36 PM
RE: Relic (edit 1) - by ChristopherSea - 03-14-2014, 06:02 PM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 03-15-2014, 01:41 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by trueenigma - 03-15-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 03-15-2014, 07:00 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by trueenigma - 03-15-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 03-15-2014, 07:31 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by trueenigma - 03-15-2014, 07:39 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 03-15-2014, 07:46 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by trueenigma - 03-15-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by jeremyyoung - 03-15-2014, 07:21 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by jeremyyoung - 03-15-2014, 08:22 AM
RE: Relic (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 03-15-2014, 08:39 AM
RE: Relic (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 03-15-2014, 11:34 AM



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