A Toast To Dionysus
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^^^Sorry to have been the thorn of your delayed gratification. Wink

Just shooting for a pure fluffernut of fun. There are two lines I wished I could have done better, but every such attempt just made the poem worse. One of those best-I-could-do's.

*Cheers* to you, my friend.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself.  I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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A Toast To Dionysus - by NobodyNothing - 03-14-2014, 08:05 AM
RE: A Toast To Dionysus - by tomoffing - 03-14-2014, 09:39 AM
RE: A Toast To Dionysus - by NobodyNothing - 03-14-2014, 11:34 AM
RE: A Toast To Dionysus - by pickles - 03-15-2014, 05:25 PM



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