03-13-2014, 09:34 AM
I'm not sure if this is senryu or haiku - I lean towards your view because of the poem's metaphorical nature - but whatever it is, it's good, creating a really rich and vivid image, into which a thousand meanings or undertones can be read. Thank you for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe