Last Orders
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This is a bit... chilling!

This line caused me trouble "where twelve incise and reveal", should it be where where twelve blinding lights incise and reveal?"

Or did you mean it to say something different? If so, "twelve" what?

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Last Orders - by tomoffing - 03-12-2014, 02:20 PM
RE: Last Orders - by Erthona - 03-12-2014, 05:50 PM
RE: Last Orders - by jeremyyoung - 03-13-2014, 02:41 AM
RE: Last Orders - by 71degrees - 03-13-2014, 11:35 PM
RE: Last Orders - by 71degrees - 03-13-2014, 11:51 PM
RE: Last Orders - by MadisonDiem - 03-13-2014, 11:47 PM
RE: Last Orders - by tomoffing - 03-14-2014, 07:29 AM
RE: Last Orders - by tomoffing - 04-11-2014, 03:32 PM



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