03-12-2014, 05:44 AM
Jeremy,
To me it read read well, only in a few parts did you seem to lose the rhythm. Not major, and I don't remember what parts they were and as this is fun poetry, I'll not go looking
could you explain this reference "may catch sight of the word Can Upset Nursing Team." Seem like more than one "word", or does this reference something I am unfamiliar with, as I am at a loss a to what you intend here? More curious, than a criticism.
Best,
dale
To me it read read well, only in a few parts did you seem to lose the rhythm. Not major, and I don't remember what parts they were and as this is fun poetry, I'll not go looking
could you explain this reference "may catch sight of the word Can Upset Nursing Team." Seem like more than one "word", or does this reference something I am unfamiliar with, as I am at a loss a to what you intend here? More curious, than a criticism.
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.