The Point Man
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Thanks guys. I sorta felt the same way, but I didn't quite know what to do as far as a direction to go in order to improve it. For me, this felt more like a "free writing" exercise.
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The Point Man - by Demeanor - 01-03-2010, 08:27 AM
RE: The Point Man - by billy - 01-03-2010, 11:20 AM
RE: The Point Man - by addy - 01-03-2010, 12:06 PM
RE: The Point Man - by Demeanor - 01-04-2010, 04:41 AM
RE: The Point Man - by billy - 01-04-2010, 06:07 AM
RE: The Point Man - by addy - 01-04-2010, 01:37 PM



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