1984 Re-interpreted

[justcloudy]

I think you misunderstood me. I liked the poem in general, I realize now I failed to mention that. There were a few things that bothered me that other people already picked up on. My biggest problem is with the title. If you changed it the whole thing would have a different feel. As it stands the title makes it a bit pretentious to my mind. It ruins the poem for me. I've read the comments and understand your intent, but as I said before, think the allusions within the poem itself are enough.

Anyway now I'm just talking in circles and will shut up.

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I don't think any of us are good enough to re-write Orwell, and I hope to god none of us think we are. ;p