03-10-2014, 04:34 AM
(03-10-2014, 04:30 AM)milo Wrote:ok(03-10-2014, 04:29 AM)trueenigma Wrote: Mine was very rushed and is gawd awful. Of course in a forty eight hour period you don't get to actually spend forty eight hours working on the poem.Peter gave some pretty detailed comments on yours over at AAPC (being that he followed you)

