03-10-2014, 04:20 AM
(03-10-2014, 01:28 AM)justcloudy Wrote: Creepy-- yes. Insightful-- also. A way of explaining something unspeakable to the outside world-- absolutely.Thanks for the kind words JC much appreciated. Keith
I know I'll be reading this again... and again.
Thanks for sharing.
(03-10-2014, 04:04 AM)tectak Wrote:Thank you tectak for the grandma tickle errors, I have made some adjustments. I'm glad its not just my family life that's like this, thanks for sharing. Rob(03-09-2014, 09:11 AM)Keith Wrote: I should explain,Some minor grammatical errors but a delightful tale of family life.
there are four of us in total,
five if I include Keith,
I'm Rob the confident one.
There's John he's intelligent but shy,
and Susie she's in a class of her own
the fourth I call the monster,
he has been growing.
We all have our rooms
inside Keith's mind,
one window and a door,
when a door unlocks your in control. Erthonaism. you're
I saw the monster move this morning,
its huge body splintered the door frame
as it hurried to its prize.
I am now in a strangers home.stranger's
This body is wasting away,
hands trembling and bloody,
I have a family tied together on my left,
they won't stop screaming,
I don't know why,
I can hear the monster coming back,
Keith needs your help.
Little blind mice see how they run cut off their toes with a carving knife see how they run
Best,
tectak
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

