A cry for help
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(03-09-2014, 09:11 AM)Keith Wrote:  I should explain,
there are four of us in total,
five if I include Keith,
I'm Rob the confident one.

There's John he's intelligent but shy,
and Susie she's in a class of her own
the fourth I call the monster,
he has been growing.

We all have our rooms
inside Keith's mind,
one window and a door,
when a door unlocks your in control. Erthonaism. you're

I saw the monster move this morning,
its huge body splintered the door frame
as it hurried to its prize.
I am now in a strangers home.stranger's
This body is wasting away,
hands trembling and bloody,
I have a family tied together on my left,
they won't stop screaming,
I don't know why,
I can hear the monster coming back,
Keith needs your help.

Little blind mice see how they run cut off their toes with a carving knife see how they run
Some minor grammatical errors but a delightful tale of family life.
Best,
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
A cry for help - by Keith - 03-09-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: A cry for help - by Leanne - 03-09-2014, 09:15 AM
RE: A cry for help - by Keith - 03-09-2014, 09:28 AM
RE: A cry for help - by billy - 03-09-2014, 09:24 AM
RE: A cry for help - by billy - 03-09-2014, 09:36 AM
RE: A cry for help - by justcloudy - 03-10-2014, 01:28 AM
RE: A cry for help - by Keith - 03-10-2014, 04:20 AM
RE: A cry for help - by tectak - 03-10-2014, 04:04 AM



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