c'mon (NSFW)

c'mon (NSFW)

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Are you alluding to me?

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03-08-2014, 03:09 PM

just a quickie for now, i'll leave solid feedback later.

and I'z gots miiinz. belee dat. it doesn't fit the rest of the language. and i'm not sure the double line spacing makes it any better.

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c'mon (NSFW) - by chingachgook - 03-08-2014, 02:38 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by billy - 03-08-2014, 03:09 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by chingachgook - 03-08-2014, 03:23 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by billy - 03-08-2014, 03:31 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by chingachgook - 03-08-2014, 03:38 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by billy - 03-08-2014, 03:47 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by chingachgook - 03-08-2014, 04:14 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by jeremyyoung - 03-08-2014, 09:06 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by tectak - 03-09-2014, 06:10 AM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by chingachgook - 03-09-2014, 11:06 PM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by jeremyyoung - 03-10-2014, 12:39 AM

RE: c'mon (NSFW) - by chingachgook - 03-22-2014, 10:55 AM

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