03-08-2014, 12:48 AM
This is something Nothing! Moreover, there is nothing feeble about this poem, as you have rendered your experience well. What I like most about this poem is the conservation of words within the confines of your ABAB rhyme scheme. The read is concise and crisp with no sacrifice of image or depth in those tidy stanzas. Well done and thanks for posting this!/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

