1984 Re-interpreted

[71degrees]

just the one nit, for me the enjambment in general felt a bit to much. created pauses where they didn't work that well.
the content is excellently descriptive.

i never saw how 84 was re-written but that was okay. julia made it a more personal poem but not sure it was relevant for me (not a nit just my POV) i like the subtle sophistication of of the Lit student.
thanks for the read, i enjoyed it

Glad you enjoyed it. Nowhere does it say 1984 was re-written. It was re-interpreted. At least according to the title. But thanks for the read anyway.