Transposon*

[billy]

i'm not keen on some of the uoda speak specially the 1st line.
the 2nd verse i like the best, mainly because the hangnail line gave me a laugh. i also like how it makes us seem small and inconsequential.

one more point is that a bit of the rhyme while okay feels forced because of the reverse syntax.

thanks for the read.

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Did we from a virus or God come?
is God a virus of simple chance,
come early to our little dance,
a party crasher of good luck,
in a singularity, we’re not stuck?
Man, would that really suck!

Are we a fingerprint miniscule?
A hangnail fallen from the maker,
Flake of skin from the baker?
Or is it only our loafs conceit,
because of infinite inherit frailty,
we think ourselves more than wheat?

No more upon canvas than a flick,
of paint on landscape so sublime,
a single vibration in a chime,
one airy molecule in God’s chant?
Then how mundane our great thoughts,
how pitiful our angry rants?

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*Bits of DNA that can travel freely about the genome. Can create mutations before and after conception, even until death. Probably responsible for the uniqueness in every person: good and bad.