just the one nit, for me the enjambment in general felt a bit to much. created pauses where they didn't work that well.
the content is excellently descriptive.
i never saw how 84 was re-written but that was okay. julia made it a more personal poem but not sure it was relevant for me (not a nit just my POV) i like the subtle sophistication of of the Lit student.
thanks for the read, i enjoyed it
the content is excellently descriptive.
i never saw how 84 was re-written but that was okay. julia made it a more personal poem but not sure it was relevant for me (not a nit just my POV) i like the subtle sophistication of of the Lit student.
thanks for the read, i enjoyed it