03-07-2014, 06:25 AM
Hi 71,
She sounds delicious and I certainly would like a slice of that French silk pie as well! This is a great tale of the girl that got away, an experience we all have had in one form or another. Therefore, I understand addressing an audience by employing 'you'. However, with the exact time and date and final exam schedule given lends itself to a first person narration. The 'Lit finals' did not help me with my fantasy, but that is really my problem! Wonderful work, thanks for sharing Julia./Chris
She sounds delicious and I certainly would like a slice of that French silk pie as well! This is a great tale of the girl that got away, an experience we all have had in one form or another. Therefore, I understand addressing an audience by employing 'you'. However, with the exact time and date and final exam schedule given lends itself to a first person narration. The 'Lit finals' did not help me with my fantasy, but that is really my problem! Wonderful work, thanks for sharing Julia./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris