03-07-2014, 05:13 AM
I'd have to read it a few more times, let it sink in some more, but my first impression is very nicely done. I hardly felt an "irk". Like that slice of French silk pie, a bittersweet and tender little slice of life, methinks.
That's all for now.
That's all for now.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."