03-04-2014, 05:59 PM
Just read through all of these - fantastic well done all who took part.
Loved that mercedes managed to make a pantoum out of the madness and that True followed with a vill.
Where to start on the feedback??
I was a bit confused about what the criteria was for the next poem. Were they meant to be a re-write of the proceeding poem, in which case some of them were great reads, but I'd say they were new writes inspired by the previous poem rather than re-writes.
Not that it matters, this was obviously good fun to take part in and the results are highly amusing.
I particularly liked how the story focused and kept a thread (with some great twists) from Dale's offering onwards.
(and Billy it might be because I've not be paying attention and I've miss your offerings...but it is good to see your work again - I love your poems. More poem writing, less nose wiping please).
Will offer some comments on individual poems soon And yes to the idea of doing this again or regularly.
Loved that mercedes managed to make a pantoum out of the madness and that True followed with a vill.
Where to start on the feedback??
I was a bit confused about what the criteria was for the next poem. Were they meant to be a re-write of the proceeding poem, in which case some of them were great reads, but I'd say they were new writes inspired by the previous poem rather than re-writes.
Not that it matters, this was obviously good fun to take part in and the results are highly amusing.
I particularly liked how the story focused and kept a thread (with some great twists) from Dale's offering onwards.
(and Billy it might be because I've not be paying attention and I've miss your offerings...but it is good to see your work again - I love your poems. More poem writing, less nose wiping please).
Will offer some comments on individual poems soon And yes to the idea of doing this again or regularly.