Cycling

[milo]

milo
would "under" work better than "in" for line 6 or still lead to a similar issue?

beau
-thanks for the kind words and suggestions. I am considering them and will make some adjustments soon

maybe, it is tough for me to reconcile without making it more complex. maybe fuse with shadows, outside headlights, beyond headlights at the headlights' edge.

have you considered "umbra" or "penumbra". I know it can be tough to fit those words in but they do seem to fit and I love saying them.