Driving Back to the Apartment (passanger seat)
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Thnx for the replies, PoetryAndPhysics, visualcondyle, and ChristopherSea.


(02-16-2014, 09:07 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:   If the boyfriend is actually the black hole
@ChristopherSea, Hmmm, there is no intended boyfriend >.< its about a drive with my brother. I'm not sure if the reader needs to know that though. What implied the presence of a boyfriend? The narrator is the supposed to be the "black hole" THnx


Anyway i've edited the op. I may still be fighting with some ambiguity, i'm not sure.
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RE: Driving Back to the Apartment (passanger seat) - by makeshift - 03-04-2014, 05:54 AM



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