03-04-2014, 05:54 AM
Thnx for the replies, PoetryAndPhysics, visualcondyle, and ChristopherSea.
Anyway i've edited the op. I may still be fighting with some ambiguity, i'm not sure.
(02-16-2014, 09:07 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote: If the boyfriend is actually the black hole@ChristopherSea, Hmmm, there is no intended boyfriend >.< its about a drive with my brother. I'm not sure if the reader needs to know that though. What implied the presence of a boyfriend? The narrator is the supposed to be the "black hole" THnx
Anyway i've edited the op. I may still be fighting with some ambiguity, i'm not sure.

