03-02-2014, 05:37 AM
[quote='kindofahippy' pid='155623' dateline='1392831679']
It's been a mere twenty minutes on this slow and painful day,
While the clock undwinds torture, and fails to fade away. Extra d in unwinds. Do you need to say 'mere' and 'slow and painful'?
Surrounded by food, but not in the mood--
My pocket's starving too, you see I think this is fine
Until I learn a skilled trade
Exchanging blood for gasoline. A little stark. I was not prepared for this harsh reality.
It's been a mere twenty minutes on this slow and painful day,
While the clock undwinds torture, and fails to fade away. Extra d in unwinds. Do you need to say 'mere' and 'slow and painful'?
Surrounded by food, but not in the mood--
My pocket's starving too, you see I think this is fine
Until I learn a skilled trade
Exchanging blood for gasoline. A little stark. I was not prepared for this harsh reality.