03-02-2014, 02:53 AM
Points for allusions to other songs, but some of the reference seem more ad hoc than an integrated part of the story. plus the whole seems to sit a bit stiff in the saddle for a ballad.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.