Two Eggs

Two Eggs

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03-01-2014, 01:27 PM

(09-14-2013, 01:21 AM)shenaz Wrote: Two eggs in the pot
Two nice round eggs
The water is hot and the heat is on
We splutter and curdle
Two round eggs
In the heat of the moment

I really like this. It is simple and clear and free from abstraction. All of it comes to meaning with the last line.

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Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 01:21 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 03:29 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 03:31 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 04:01 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 04:05 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Snowbells - 09-14-2013, 09:17 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 05:23 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by nhanna1223 - 02-03-2014, 02:11 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-03-2014, 06:05 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by LickinLyrics - 02-03-2014, 07:16 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by tomoffing - 02-03-2014, 07:56 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by DominoMan - 02-03-2014, 02:41 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by kingmicahde - 02-07-2014, 07:26 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-08-2014, 02:12 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by kingmicahde - 02-08-2014, 04:31 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-08-2014, 03:58 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by Sheep - 02-11-2014, 06:29 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-12-2014, 03:17 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by cfgorman - 03-01-2014, 01:27 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 03-02-2014, 05:46 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Izo - 03-15-2014, 07:56 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by WordJunky - 03-16-2014, 08:29 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by Babeanew - 04-04-2014, 09:17 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 02:10 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by California - 04-07-2014, 07:40 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 12:23 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Robert9614 - 04-22-2014, 08:35 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Willpark - 04-29-2014, 12:54 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by RiverNotch - 04-29-2014, 06:17 PM

RE: Two Eggs - by constellation - 04-30-2014, 07:36 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 05-01-2014, 09:27 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by bbcashdollar - 05-12-2014, 06:03 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:22 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by newsclippings - 05-12-2014, 11:38 AM

RE: Two Eggs - by Igor - 02-28-2016, 11:06 AM

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