First shot at poetry

First shot at poetry

rowens
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02-28-2014, 12:31 AM

crisp lines become a blur

A masterpiece condemned to my mind.

Those are my suggestions for examples of how to smooth things out.

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First shot at poetry - by Bahdriel - 02-27-2014, 01:01 AM

RE: First shot at poetry - by rowens - 02-27-2014, 04:19 AM

RE: First shot at poetry - by Bahdriel - 02-27-2014, 05:22 AM

RE: First shot at poetry - by Bahdriel - 02-27-2014, 06:31 PM

RE: First shot at poetry - by rowens - 02-27-2014, 06:35 AM

RE: First shot at poetry - by Bahdriel - 02-28-2014, 12:13 AM

RE: First shot at poetry - by rowens - 02-28-2014, 12:31 AM

RE: First shot at poetry - by Bahdriel - 02-28-2014, 01:34 AM

RE: First shot at poetry - by rowens - 02-28-2014, 05:13 AM

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