02-27-2014, 11:34 PM
You don't need the "V2" and "V3" in there.
"sands of time" is far to cliché IMO.
Need a period at the end of stanza 2.
V2 line 3; V3 line 1: "its"
I liked the last two lines quite a bit.
"sands of time" is far to cliché IMO.
Need a period at the end of stanza 2.
V2 line 3; V3 line 1: "its"
I liked the last two lines quite a bit.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!