Love Muse
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(02-27-2014, 02:15 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Thanks Milo,

"Poet's
And bathes"

She is bathing him in the spring of inspiration. "the springs of Helicon and Pieris"
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"And there is something grammatically crazy about "turning desire into seeking out those places" "

She converts his sexual drive into the drive to seek universal truth. "where heaven touches terra"


Dale
Yah, on planet earth we spell it "bathes"

If you want to convert noun to noun you need to include "the" and "of", otherwise your magical muse converts nouns to participles an that just doesn't happen.
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Messages In This Thread
Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-27-2014, 01:30 PM
RE: Love Muse - by milo - 02-27-2014, 01:37 PM
RE: Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-27-2014, 02:15 PM
RE: Love Muse - by milo - 02-27-2014, 02:18 PM
RE: Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-28-2014, 12:30 AM
RE: Love Muse - by ellajam - 02-28-2014, 05:55 AM
RE: Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-28-2014, 09:44 AM



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