Some thoughts spilled.
#8
yes, i'd also like to know what ellajam is Blush
but to the poem.
i really enjoyed the read, some of the enjambment didn't work to well for me.
i think it could have had a few poetic devices in it
the last two lines are spot on and gave me a laugh. men are bragging bastards at the end of the day.
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Some thoughts spilled. - by newsclippings - 02-11-2014, 02:30 PM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by Erthona - 02-13-2014, 09:34 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by newsclippings - 02-13-2014, 11:55 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by ellajam - 02-13-2014, 10:00 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by just mercedes - 02-13-2014, 10:08 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by newsclippings - 02-16-2014, 04:11 PM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by billy - 02-27-2014, 11:40 AM



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