02-27-2014, 11:13 AM
milo
- that was my intention. would you suggest switching the "swimming," the "in," or something else altogether? thanks for the time
rowens
-thanks for the words. I understand what you're saying about the ending, though I think it ties in with the title. suggestions are always welcome
- that was my intention. would you suggest switching the "swimming," the "in," or something else altogether? thanks for the time
rowens
-thanks for the words. I understand what you're saying about the ending, though I think it ties in with the title. suggestions are always welcome