02-27-2014, 03:19 AM
this is a well written little poem, despite the 'message' being somewhat trite and a million times done before and done better. It all sounds a bit melodramatic and cliche ridden; like the kind of advice one would here a sympathetic friend on some cheesy american sitcom give: "you don't need to settle for someone who is unworthy. There will be a man who loves you body, mind and soul." not to mention it is incredibly depressing, self-defeating and limp.
despite all that, kind of liked it.
despite all that, kind of liked it.