Nothing Special

[milo]

There is a building.
There is man inside the building, looking out the window.
He feels confined within the building.
He jumps from the building.
The man is still alive while falling from the building.
The man hits the pavement and dies.
He can no longer feel confinement, because he is dead.

Surprisingly, I like this 100% better than what I initially posted. Thank you!

I think you are making progress.
Ok, a man is feeling confined inside a building. Instead of telling me that, show me what he sees and thinks so that I can feel confined as well or empathize with him.