02-25-2014, 11:19 AM
Thank you for your feedback. I believe I see your point. By leading with "Steel spikes," I may confuse the audience into thinking the "Steel spikes" are the subject throughout.
The subject is an individual, rather than steel spikes, making it probable/possible that they are living and confined.
The subject is an individual, rather than steel spikes, making it probable/possible that they are living and confined.