Drought of Libidinousness

[J.Frost]

Seems too artificial. Anyway, it seems like a lot of wasted words.

Hi rowens,

To elaborate on my work: I set it in iambic tetrameter, and my intent was to paint a vivid picture through strong imagery and analogies within the syllabic limitations; so, contrary to what you stated, each word used was essential to completing all of the aforementioned tasks. I posted it hoping for constructive criticism, and I thank you for your feedback.

Please, if you don't mind, expand on your analysis so that I may further my skills and revise the poem accordingly. Thank you!