02-24-2014, 12:26 PM
It is a very well written poem, I see no mistakes with it. The only item that might be changed is in S1, L3. A period here instead of a comma, and make L4 a new line. This would add emphasis to the chill of winter.
Overall, an amusing poem in a rondeau form I didn't expect, I'm used to the limerick being used for the purpose. Thanks for the read!
Overall, an amusing poem in a rondeau form I didn't expect, I'm used to the limerick being used for the purpose. Thanks for the read!
*Warning: blatant tomfoolery above this line