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Spinning Tires (edit #2)

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02-24-2014, 10:23 AM

Well, I've got an edit up for S1 and the refrain, but as usual I not sure if I've killed the poor thing.

So far I'm dry on a rhyme to replace winch, all I can think of is grinch, maybe I'll pull out the Dr. Seuss and see what else he's got. Big Grin

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Thanks again for all the help, all comments welcome.

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Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 12:07 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by milo - 02-24-2014, 12:12 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 12:21 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by justcloudy - 02-24-2014, 12:14 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by ChristopherSea - 02-24-2014, 12:40 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 12:53 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by ChristopherSea - 02-24-2014, 01:03 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by trueenigma - 02-24-2014, 02:08 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 04:20 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by trueenigma - 02-24-2014, 05:26 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by ChristopherSea - 02-24-2014, 05:11 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by billy - 02-24-2014, 07:39 AM

RE: Spinning Tires - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 07:56 AM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #1) - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 10:23 AM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #1) - by milo - 02-24-2014, 11:01 AM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #1) - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 12:20 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #1) - by milo - 02-24-2014, 12:29 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #1) - by kindofahippy - 02-24-2014, 12:26 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #1) - by ellajam - 02-24-2014, 08:45 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by ellajam - 02-25-2014, 03:43 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by ChristopherSea - 02-25-2014, 08:42 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by justcloudy - 02-26-2014, 01:05 AM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by kindofahippy - 02-26-2014, 03:28 AM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by ellajam - 02-26-2014, 10:45 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by milo - 02-27-2014, 02:34 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-31-2015, 09:48 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by Pyrra - 12-31-2015, 11:05 PM

RE: Spinning Tires (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-31-2015, 11:56 PM

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