Spinning Tires (edit #2)

[ellajam]

i have never had a wrench in my trunks but lets not make this about me,

Thanks for that, and for reading, billy. The switch of lines 1 & 2 would be lovely, but the form uses the first few words of L1 as the refrain. I don't think emphasizing the birds even more would go over big.

Thanks for the Arctic, I'll look into it.