02-24-2014, 07:35 AM
That's ok Travis, you don't need to worry about proper critiques in this forum -- though you've not done a bad job 
Yes, this is definitely about love. It's just not about sex. "Raw" is a great way to describe it, thank you.

Yes, this is definitely about love. It's just not about sex. "Raw" is a great way to describe it, thank you.
It could be worse
