The Lewd

The Lewd

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#16

02-24-2014, 07:35 AM

That's ok Travis, you don't need to worry about proper critiques in this forum -- though you've not done a bad job Smile

Yes, this is definitely about love. It's just not about sex. "Raw" is a great way to describe it, thank you.

It could be worse

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The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-22-2014, 10:09 AM

RE: The Lewd - by rayheinrich - 02-22-2014, 11:10 AM

RE: The Lewd - by billy - 02-22-2014, 03:25 PM

RE: The Lewd - by Erthona - 02-22-2014, 11:56 AM

RE: The Lewd - by kindofahippy - 02-22-2014, 12:10 PM

RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-22-2014, 03:45 PM

RE: The Lewd - by crow - 02-22-2014, 03:46 PM

RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-22-2014, 03:55 PM

RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-23-2014, 05:02 AM

RE: The Lewd - by rowens - 02-23-2014, 05:09 AM

RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-23-2014, 05:26 AM

RE: The Lewd - by rowens - 02-23-2014, 05:30 AM

RE: The Lewd - by ellajam - 02-23-2014, 09:03 AM

RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-23-2014, 09:16 AM

RE: The Lewd - by travis.reeder - 02-24-2014, 06:18 AM

RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-24-2014, 07:35 AM

RE: The Lewd - by Erthona - 02-24-2014, 08:28 AM

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