02-24-2014, 06:18 AM
I love this poem. Forgive me if I'm wrong in my interpretation, but I sense this is raw, irrevocable love. Maybe I only see what I want to see, but I think that this is more to the point about raw emotion and better at getting that point across than many novelists have done. Kudos to you Leanne
(Sorry for being a horrible critique, I'm not so good at that part of things)
(Sorry for being a horrible critique, I'm not so good at that part of things)
