The Lewd
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I love this poem. Forgive me if I'm wrong in my interpretation, but I sense this is raw, irrevocable love. Maybe I only see what I want to see, but I think that this is more to the point about raw emotion and better at getting that point across than many novelists have done. Kudos to you Leanne
(Sorry for being a horrible critique, I'm not so good at that part of things)
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The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-22-2014, 10:09 AM
RE: The Lewd - by rayheinrich - 02-22-2014, 11:10 AM
RE: The Lewd - by billy - 02-22-2014, 03:25 PM
RE: The Lewd - by Erthona - 02-22-2014, 11:56 AM
RE: The Lewd - by kindofahippy - 02-22-2014, 12:10 PM
RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-22-2014, 03:45 PM
RE: The Lewd - by crow - 02-22-2014, 03:46 PM
RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-22-2014, 03:55 PM
RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-23-2014, 05:02 AM
RE: The Lewd - by rowens - 02-23-2014, 05:09 AM
RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-23-2014, 05:26 AM
RE: The Lewd - by rowens - 02-23-2014, 05:30 AM
RE: The Lewd - by ellajam - 02-23-2014, 09:03 AM
RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-23-2014, 09:16 AM
RE: The Lewd - by travis.reeder - 02-24-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: The Lewd - by Leanne - 02-24-2014, 07:35 AM
RE: The Lewd - by Erthona - 02-24-2014, 08:28 AM



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