02-24-2014, 04:20 AM
(02-24-2014, 02:08 AM)trueenigma Wrote: I'm pretty familiar with objects bringing back memories.Hi, true, I've edited a bit since you helped me in the practice thread. I have a small winch in the basement somewhere, used it for straightening out an ice-pulled dock, I guess that's the simplest form of it. Do you think having it in the trunk is unbelievable?
I have a winch on the front bumper. Never seen one in the trunk.
The ynch/inch sound as a rhyme just sounds silly to me for some reason.
The inch sound, it is a silly poem, do you think the sound hurts the poem?
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