"- So, lunch is on me then ! -"
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Thank you for the welcome and taking the time to comment, Ellajam; point well taken about line three, perhaps it needs a re-jig.

I don't really do deep and meaningful Poetry, so, a "fun read" will do just dandy !!

Obi.
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"- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by Obadiah Grey - 02-23-2014, 04:13 PM
RE: "- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by ellajam - 02-23-2014, 04:42 PM
RE: "- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by Obadiah Grey - 02-24-2014, 12:18 AM
RE: "- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by J.Frost - 02-24-2014, 06:16 AM
RE: "- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by Obadiah Grey - 02-25-2014, 01:09 AM



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