02-23-2014, 05:30 AM
(02-23-2014, 05:05 AM)Leanne Wrote: Yes, scene is better. I don't know about in your lingo, but here the word "outlook" is interchangeable with "lookout" -- so it's a tourist spot, but looking off the road and not on
Actually, tourist spot or tourist attraction would fit this theme of likening a accident scene to an art exhibition or theatrical production. You have almost inadvertantly persuaded me to change it back. I'll have to let the poem sit awhile and give it a fresk look again.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris


