02-23-2014, 05:09 AM
This isn't for poem-poem feedback?
At first it was kind of boring to me, and the last line sounded too obvious. But then I liked it a little better, and the last line worked.
It could be one woman talking to another, or to herself. But it doesn't seem very important how many people are talking. Or is it important?
At first it was kind of boring to me, and the last line sounded too obvious. But then I liked it a little better, and the last line worked.
It could be one woman talking to another, or to herself. But it doesn't seem very important how many people are talking. Or is it important?