02-22-2014, 03:20 AM
Yeah, this is all self-directed for the speaker.
Is your problem with the last stanza the shortness? I don't understand what you mean when say it 'sounds like someone talking and not much else'. Is the meaning not coming through for you? Does the metaphor not make sense? It may not be wordy, but the argument is still there, I think.
Is your problem with the last stanza the shortness? I don't understand what you mean when say it 'sounds like someone talking and not much else'. Is the meaning not coming through for you? Does the metaphor not make sense? It may not be wordy, but the argument is still there, I think.