02-22-2014, 12:23 AM
Thanks ella
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Tom,
It could be you have read it before...somewhere else (Maybe at poetry .com), it has never been posted on this site. With all these people posting physical love poetry, I thought I would dust this off and see how it flew. I wrote it for an ebony maid, but of course the reference is a double entendre. But at least you caught the black box, which I am sure has happened on more than one occasion
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Chris,
Yes references from all over. The cricket in the wall was from an Asian story I read, fairly well known, but with the the drugs they have me on my memory is often cloudy, as it is today and I cannot call up the reference. Shameful when one cannot remember ones on allusions, but there it is. As to pinball Wizard the lyrics read
"The digit counters fall
That deaf, dumb and blind kid
Sure plays a mean pinball!"
So they do in fact drop downward.
As to the use, there are several. There is a double entendre on "digit" and there is the idea that if you play her correctly you'll run up the score, i.e., give her many orgasm, not to mention the idea of getting a free replay. Plus I thought both horse riding and playing pinball were apt descriptions for sex, just in different ways. One is just pure banging, and one is more manipulative, both generally occur in a good extended round of sex. You'll notice there are a number of reference to "paw the pearl of precious price" that is stimulating her clitoris, and usually this is done with ones digits, that is if the larger digit is already spelunking, so as make it impossible to be a cunning linguist.
Anyway, the reference to "Pinball Wizard" was quite intentional, but points to you for recognizing it.
Thanks for reading and commenting,
dale
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Tom,
It could be you have read it before...somewhere else (Maybe at poetry .com), it has never been posted on this site. With all these people posting physical love poetry, I thought I would dust this off and see how it flew. I wrote it for an ebony maid, but of course the reference is a double entendre. But at least you caught the black box, which I am sure has happened on more than one occasion
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Chris,
Yes references from all over. The cricket in the wall was from an Asian story I read, fairly well known, but with the the drugs they have me on my memory is often cloudy, as it is today and I cannot call up the reference. Shameful when one cannot remember ones on allusions, but there it is. As to pinball Wizard the lyrics read
"The digit counters fall
That deaf, dumb and blind kid
Sure plays a mean pinball!"
So they do in fact drop downward.
As to the use, there are several. There is a double entendre on "digit" and there is the idea that if you play her correctly you'll run up the score, i.e., give her many orgasm, not to mention the idea of getting a free replay. Plus I thought both horse riding and playing pinball were apt descriptions for sex, just in different ways. One is just pure banging, and one is more manipulative, both generally occur in a good extended round of sex. You'll notice there are a number of reference to "paw the pearl of precious price" that is stimulating her clitoris, and usually this is done with ones digits, that is if the larger digit is already spelunking, so as make it impossible to be a cunning linguist.
Anyway, the reference to "Pinball Wizard" was quite intentional, but points to you for recognizing it.
Thanks for reading and commenting,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.