Caixa Preta

[ChristopherSea]

Caixa Preta? It reads like a Portuguese possession of sorts, but knowing you, this could be a Buddhism reference as well. The poem itself is a hailstorm of alliterations and 'ing'ed adjectives that usually ring my ears and weaken their stems, but they fare alright herein. I am not certain if you are editing something in the 'For Fun' forum regardless. However, I would probably change 'that digit counter falls' as it is so signature of the Who's 'Pinball Wizard' (don't digit counters rise anyway?). It's an impressive piece worth more than one read to take in all of the sights and sonics. Cheers/Chris