(warning: expletives) Six Years of Differences

[billy]

I might. But they're getting ready to kick me out and I don't want to start yet if I can't finish.

use the pm for chatting please, or the pig's arse

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i enjoyed the read, the finding out why kant and co were misspelled. the poem felt as though it started mid stream and many do, i just felt there should be something more before the first line. still i enjoyed it. looking forward to more..i see you already left some feedback elsewhere. :J:

thanks for the read.

Six Years of Differences

You might as well be half his age
for all you know
about life
and Kont kont?
and Nietzche
or whatever the fuck it is now i get it, a suggestion would be [or whoever the fuck]
don’t wrap yourself up in him that way
why are you trying to end your life
before it's even begun?

You don’t need to ‘make it’
some equational bullshit combination
of your college sweetheart
and two-point-six or so squalling messes
and an oven that never stops i like this line, it sounds like a death knell.

You don’t even like to bake
that’s how full of shit you are
are you that afraid no one wants you?
that you’ll never love again? this line felt weak

You are fire
and he is only the first
so if he tries to drown you
let him burn a suggestion would be [so burn him]
and go on

Note: Mispellings Misspellings of Kant and Nietzsche are intentional.