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Tired

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#12

02-21-2014, 12:47 PM

Love it! The first three lines I think could be me new life mantra haha. I don't know of any advice I could give to improve it, but I'm sure if you had the creativity to write something so clever, you will be able to fine tune it to be even better. Good luck.

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Tired - by Wjames - 01-25-2014, 09:14 AM

RE: Tired - by just mercedes - 01-25-2014, 09:51 AM

RE: Tired - by Wjames - 01-26-2014, 01:51 AM

RE: Tired - by beaufort - 01-26-2014, 07:46 AM

RE: Tired - by tomoffing - 01-28-2014, 11:21 AM

RE: Tired - by Erthona - 01-28-2014, 11:54 PM

RE: Tired - by alexanjah1 - 01-29-2014, 01:46 AM

RE: Tired - by Zainabk - 01-29-2014, 11:11 AM

RE: Tired - by Humbert - 02-02-2014, 11:44 AM

RE: Tired - by LickinLyrics - 02-02-2014, 07:52 PM

RE: Tired - by Alex13 - 02-18-2014, 10:44 AM

RE: Tired - by alatos - 02-21-2014, 12:47 PM

RE: Tired - by Bahdriel - 02-27-2014, 01:32 AM

RE: Tired - by 1skylande1 - 03-23-2014, 03:14 PM

RE: Tired - by denniswilson - 04-07-2014, 05:32 AM

RE: Tired - by Willpark - 04-28-2014, 11:34 AM

RE: Tired - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 09:50 PM

RE: Tired - by moniker - 04-29-2014, 10:11 AM

RE: Tired - by Wjames - 04-29-2014, 10:38 AM

RE: Tired - by aerickson - 04-30-2014, 01:53 AM

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